You have a great drawing style...very impressive...but the composition leaves a lot to be desired, each element is evenly placed about the canvas so that the whole thing lacks flow and energy.

I agree, the composition looks a bit off... You might be able to improve it a bit with some well-placed background elements to balance the figures. As it is, the eye has to make a lot of conscious decisions as to what it looks at. There isn't a clear path for the eye to follow through across the page.

The style is wild, though--very nice. The overall effect is somewhere between a woodcut and chiseled marker. Very cool.

heeh nice alper
getting nice appraising comments from dave is really hard, that i am still working on

your loose but dynamic style adds a lot to your drawings
but i couldnt follow the action in this piece
the motion seems scattered and results in not being able to draw attention to the whole

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